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Thursday, December 13, 2012

CREATIVE CHALLENGE: FESTIVE

 
So

many

garlands!

So many lights!

It’s Xmas time,

Everywhere is bright!

Santa Claus will come to town,

Perhaps together with Mrs. Claus,

Carrying tons of gifts made by their elves,

However, not in large quantities to deliver

To each and every town’s unfavoured child

Who pains me whenever I see with his nose

Glued to the window display of a store,

Staring at one toy red car,
 
He would love to play with

As if doing it with

a

STAR!

©Belita

14 comments:

  1. Love the photo and poem Belita. it made me wish for less complicated times.

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    1. Thanks, Shayna. The world of today is not easy at all...

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  2. So well written, and lovely arranged shape.

    Merry Christmas! Belita

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  3. Not only well-written, but I love how you've arranged the words!!! Very creative!!

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    1. This was not very easy but it gave me fun. Thanks, Mitch, for the visit and kind comment.

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  4. Cute kids window shopping.

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  5. Wonderful post, Belita, are they really children, looks like triplets, I saw some dolls arranged like that outside a toy shop window once, why asking.

    My heart is breaking for all our homeless children, some standing on street corners begging, every single traffic light has a beggar with a sign. It is sheer impossible to give them all *sniff*

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  6. Very touching and very creative *brava*

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  7. Oh belita!! This is an awesome write!!! One of your best! I like how it's even shaped like an ornament ! Fabulous!!!!

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  8. Great Christmas poem...very well...

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