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Tuesday, February 26, 2013

CREATIVE CHALLENGE: INDESCRIBABLE


I take the plunge into
The ocean of dreams…
The sound of waves crashing
Erodes my stress
Time loses all meaning
Never daring to break
My continuous dream,
Gulls mewing above
Seem to draw out
What might be a crazy silence,
Their ballet embellishing the scenery,
Rhythmic flight, imaginary and real...
Piruets in the sky... surreal choreography...
Hues of blue, mild dancing sunbeams
Steal a kiss on my forehead over a warm caress
On a chilled winter morning,
Enhancing, not by words,
What beauty truly is,
A soft breeze caresses my skin
An indescribable moment...
Peace invades my soul
Making me believe
What seemed impossible yesterday
May be possible today...
©Belita

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  1. Danette Tuesday, February 26, 2013

    what a wonderful meditation I have just experienced in your words *sigh* thank you!

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  2. Belita Isabel JaneiraTuesday, February 26, 2013

    Thank you, Danette!

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  3. AnonymousTuesday, February 26, 2013

    One can easily get lost in the imagery projected in your words.....This is one of those writes where you truly need someone with a wonderful voice to read to you while your eyes are closed and you can not only SEE what the words say...but go THERE also!

    Thanks, Belita!

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    1. Belita Isabel JaneiraTuesday, February 26, 2013

      Thanks, Linda! We all have moments of inspiration...

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  4. Tim .. Another MP RefugeeTuesday, February 26, 2013

    There is something about the sand, surf and ocean breezes that seem to bring these emotions to the surface.

    Great write!

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  5. SofiaTuesday, February 26, 2013

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  6. SofiaTuesday, February 26, 2013

    Did your yesterday's dream come true?

    Unusually romantic write from you, Belita

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  7. MitchyLRTuesday, February 26, 2013

    That is a wonderful poem, Belita!! The images created by your words are so clear. I would venture to say this is one of the best things you have written!!

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    1. Belita Isabel JaneiraTuesday, February 26, 2013

      Thanks, Mitch, for your comment. Praise my muse not me...

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  8. ShaynacwingsTuesday, February 26, 2013

    Bravo Belita!!! Your photo has a lonely feel to it.

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  9. Crazy Dane in AfricaTuesday, February 26, 2013

    Absolutely Brilliant write, Belita. I lost myself for a few minutes. So happy I took time to come past quickly while having my morning tea. Love it!

    "What seemed impossible yesterday
    May be possible today..."

    *sigh*

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    1. Belita Isabel JaneiraTuesday, February 26, 2013

      Thank you, Marianne! Good to read my words joined you at your morning tea...

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  10. tesstruhartzTuesday, February 26, 2013

    You took me there for a while and I felt the possible.

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  11. UnknownTuesday, February 26, 2013

    Lovely entry, Belita

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  12. Pat Gerber-RelfTuesday, February 26, 2013

    What a wonderful descriptive poem - you are really gifted

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