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Tuesday, September 25, 2012

CREATIVE CHALLENGE: BURDEN

 

In silence, the burden is carried,
The burden of her life,
 The burden of absence,
Absence of her loved ones,
Emotional weight from her past.
Every time the sun rises
The burden brings her ageing,
Heavier weight,
More absences,
Shorter life!
©Belita
 
 
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12 comments:

  1. your poem expresses sympathy and understanding not many people want to feel...excellent writing and photo!

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  2. you have cut to the heart of her burden... well done...

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  3. If only there were a book written telling us how to NOT allow our burdens to suppress the joys in life!! How true your words are for so many...wonderful write, Belita!

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  4. forgot my link: http://myboomerplace.com/blog/view/id_41149/title_Creative-Challenge-#223"His-Burden"/

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  5. Burdens definitely weigh us down. Good write!!

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  6. Excellent photo composition - our burdens get heavier and larger with the years sometimes
    My Burden

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  7. A sad story..told in a very artistic way..

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  8. Unfortunately we all have had to deal with them one way or another, and no doubt haven't finished yet.

    A beautiful photo, an oh so true story.

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  9. This is a very touching piece. Well done.

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  10. You understand so very well...Beautiful combo of picture and words

    http://in-the-sun.blogspot.com/2012/09/resting-my-burden-cc-223.html

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