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Monday, August 05, 2013

CREATIVE CHALLENGE: CULPRIT


As he was driving fast
He received a text message
He looked down to read it:
An invitation for breakfast
That turned into a presage.
The accident happened
In a blink of an eye,
No time to text a reply.
Was the message the culprit?
or
Hadn’t he got a driving permit?
©Belita
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10 comments:

  1. Danette Tuesday, August 06, 2013

    Possibly both!? Very clever post! I like the blurriness of the photo for this poem :)

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  2. AnonymousTuesday, August 06, 2013

    A text for breakfast.....coulda been a funeral...HIS! LOL

    well done, Belita

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  3. tesstruhartzWednesday, August 07, 2013

    which is the culprit, will we ever know? good one

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  4. Pat Gerber-RelfWednesday, August 07, 2013

    In our new car we have it on loudspeaker, but I still do not know how it works. In this case it would have been safer. I take it it was a quick shot, to make sure no-one saw you doing it, or was you nervous.

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    1. Belita Isabel JaneiraWednesday, August 07, 2013

      You're right, Pat! It was a very quick shot. I was running in a car in the opposite direction...

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  5. UnknownThursday, August 08, 2013

    great photo and poem! a driving permit and an instructor would have def helped :P

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  6. AnonymousSaturday, August 10, 2013

    Fantastic post.

    http://www.whisperingcorridors.com/2013/08/the-coming-storm-creative-challenge-263.html

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